Thomas Brennan Message Board
Thomas Brennan the first posts on 3/2/2006 7:33:40 AM
gis a ring mate where you from we could be related cos i hav eno family and i am a loner that lives in hoyland in a box with my mate brett
Jackie posts on 2/20/2006 11:59:00 AM
You need a better editor. "Me and Sam went" is not proper English. I found this in at least 6 places. It should be "Sam and I went".
I think you should also have someone from the east coast of the US read your book before publishing to make sure the expressions are really ones that east coast people would use.
Note: the views expressed here are only those of the posters.
